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Did you know
That when my eyes are clouded
And my mind is empty
I can hear the clock ticking,
Counting each worthless second gone by.
Do matter how hard I try,
My heart won't beat in unison
With the indefinite continuation
Of life.


Did you know
That when I lay with my ear close to the ground
I can hear the pulse of the earth beneath me.
It slowly spins,
So alive
Yet filled with the dead.

Did you also know
That when the blood rushes through my body,
I can hear the wind tremble and quake
With a familiar fear.
It shudders
Because it knows its fleeting existence
Will slip through the world's fingers.

Did you know
That I'm afraid of that too?
This is an entry for setmyworldintomotion's contest fav.me/d759bhn
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
I really enjoyed reading this. Awesome use of imagery. :) 
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart: :tighthug:
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :happybounce: Huggle! Heart 
And thank you for the llama. Meow :3 
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thank you for your entry! :heart:
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
sure thing! :aww:
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
woah! amazing! love the word choice! (to me the word choice is very important) great job! You should check out my new group :iconlivingpoets: You would be perfect for it! :)  (gotta advertise group somehow right?)
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
Sure thing!
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
welcome and thanks :)
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Great piece! :heart: this! "Favorite part: I can hear the pulse of the earth beneath me. It slowly spins, So alive Yet filled with the dead." Brilliant! :D
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart: :aww:
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